The Good and the not so Good

Annie on my Mind has the feeling of a classic first love story. The awkwardness, confusion, excitement, and rush of new emotions remind me of my first love.  That being said, this book is slower than the others. It takes quite a few chapters to really get into the story. I still haven’t invested in the characters and I feel like some of the dialogue is unbelievable. The interactions between Liza and her brother are not believable. I can tell the author of this book never had a brother. Although the dialogue could use some work, I do think that the author did a good job making the language in the book accessible for adolescents.

I loved Annie and Liza’s first meeting in the museum. I thought it was sweet and fun and it really showed both of their personalities. I liked how awkward Liza felt when Annie was acting like a knight but then she opened up herself and did the same thing. It shows that Liza is hesitant to express herself which also means she may be slow to express her feelings about Annie.  Then later Annie is the first one to call, once again showing Liza’s hesitation. 

While I haven’t invested in the main characters yet I think there are a lot of interesting characters. The principal Mrs. Poindexter is a great antagonist. I can see the understanding, fair, Ms. Stevenson being a good mentor while also creating a nice contrast to Mrs. Poindexter.

So far the book is enjoyable but I am not loving it. I feel like there should be more action and drama, but who knows maybe I have not read far enough yet.