The writing style for Annie
on my Mind is written in epistolary, letter writing, tradition. Liza’s is
writing these letters to Annie basically stating what she feels; however, she
never ends up sending them. Before the letters, we get a perspective of how
Annie’s and Liza’s relationship began to shape. We get a better understanding
of Liza through her letters to Annie. I enjoy the letters because we get to see
and hear what Liza actually thinks about the situation from her heart. The
letters add character and emotional strength to the novel. Us as readers can
relate to the letters because I bet sometime in our lives we have wrote letters
and have never sent them. I know from my own experiences.
The epistolary style leaves us asking more questions than
what we started with. The third perspective view gives us an insight of what
happened between the two girls, Annie and Liza. In the beginning of the story,
Liza is writing a letter to Annie but knows she is not going to send it. The
question I had from the beginning is why she was not going to send it. What
happened between the girls? The whole time reading the story, I was wondering
if we would ever figure out why the girls do not talk anymore. Even in the end,
they do not tell us how the girls ended their senior year or even when the
Annie visited Liza out in California. We were asking one question at the
beginning; however, after reading the letters and past events, we are left with
multiple questions unanswered.
We get a descriptive description of all the characters besides
Liza. On page 4, we get a little description of Liza. It states Liza runs her
hand through her short, already tousled short brownish hair; she was shorted
than the 5’3”. Liza does not talk about herself; she focuses on the people
around her and how they make her feel. In Liza’s letters, we get the emotion
description of her because we have sense her thoughts of how Annie and the
situation made her feel. On page 8, Liza describes Annie in great detail, “she
had very long black hair, round face with a small little-kid’s nose and a
sad-looking mouth.” From Liza’s descriptions of Annie in her letters, we know
she cares deeply about her and that gives us a deeper connection with both of
the characters.
The letter style is written to Annie during their first
year of college away from each other. From the first letter, we get a sense of
trouble in the girls’ relationship; therefore, from the beginning it kept the
suspense going. Through the letters and going back to the events in their
relationship, we had to navigate through their relationship. In the letters, we
comprehend how hard and complicated love is. When Liza is trying to remember
what happened during her senior year, we understand how unsure someone’s
feelings can be. In the end, the readers and Liza realized she did love Annie
and want to be with her. There is a lot of emotion packed into the reading that
helps us bond with each character. Throughout the story, I was cheering for both
Annie and Liza because I know from past relationship, even though it’s not the
same type of relationship, that you can rise about peoples disliking and find
what truly makes you happy.
I think you're right. The letters make the story more genuine. The reader is able to relate to the narrator right away because we have all written letters or notes that we are afraid to send. The reader relates to the narrator and then is able to invest in the story with the question, "Why is she afraid to send the letter"?
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kristin's comment, and I agree with your comment that we can relate. I know I've written letters filled with thoughts I wished I could say (some of those letters were nicer than others!)but couldn't. At the end, it does seem that Liza realizes, finally, that she is able to say what she thought she couldn't. The letters helped her work through her own feelings, her fears, the events of the past, and so on.
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